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I am emerging, from a terrible pain of screams, sweat and noise that I am barely concious of. I cannot see; though I have eye, I have no desire to open them. And my ears shrivel with the crescendo of confused sounds that greet them like fire.

Like the rose's thorns dragged across the palm of a hand.

I have emerged through water, from one abyss into the clutches of another. The wet walls that surrounded me now fill me with a tormetning chill. My stiff limbs draw up against my chest, and my throat begins to screech without the aid of my nerves.

From this abyss,
I have no name.

I have no aspirations, no desires. I am awake and drowning within my own sounds, but I am empty. My eyes glisten like the milky sky at twilight beneath their borders, but will they turn to hues of ice, emerald, or amber? I am incomplete in my beginning. My origin has given me a shadow; I can feel pain. I can even create dialogue, though it makes sense only to myself.

I am a flower,
Screaming.

There is a shudder of skin around me, surrounding. How are these hands to create? The affliction of gender is shaping me, but it is merely a drop against a much greater canvas. I do not yet bear a personality, wear a name, though thoughts and fears already exist in my spiralling genes, restless against my ribs. The DNA of a philiosopher, an artist, or a labourer? A doctor, or a mother?

What will emerge,
And what shall be left in the womb?
©2009 ~clo-1991
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A very experimental piece, dealing with the origins of life, and the possibilities that an 'empty' life holds within its complex DNA of characteristics, features and feelings. When there are no limits, what are the possibilities?

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:iconorangemonkey42:
Wooow, This is really REALLY good clo! All the emerging imagery sets a great tone.

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MUHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA *ahem* thats a nervous disorder

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It is the beautiful chronicle of a resurrection. It has really moved me; I was in need of such a holy poem: it is as though you had descended to the innermost circle of my being and fetched a symphony thence. This is just what I have been feeling for almost one year, just as I would have liked to be able to express it. The same words, same emotions, the same doubts, the same existential despair. I must congratulate you and thank you for this piece: it is a relief to read it, a useless relief, indeed, but a sacred one. If time ran backwards, I might say it is prophetic.

“my throat begins to screech without the aid of my nerves”

This is puzzlingly genial (though any physician would probably raise an eyebrow at it :D )

“I have no aspirations, no desires.”

Simple and, at the same time, as immense as the radical astonishment that is born in our bosoms when, looking at the night’s sky, we realize how terrible everything is.

“The DNA of a philosopher, an artist, or a labourer? A doctor, or a mother?”

This is a declaration of mad power, of bitter independence, of how ours we become once sorrow has crushed us.

Wonderful work, Chloe! I held it for certain that you were going to come back like a storm ;) !

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"I am a silhouette of the person wandering in my dreams"
Mark Jansen

"Sing what you can't say
Forget what you can't play"
Tuomas Holopainen

"I hope your stepson doesn't eat the fish!"
Serj Tankian
:iconclo-1991:
Thank you very much, I wasn't too sure about this piece in all honesty, but as I was typing it up, I think I managed to improve it considerably.


As for the coming back like a storm...its an uphill struggle :(

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